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Jul 2 2008  | Views 167 |  Comments  (11)
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  taureandude23 posted 2 weeks ago

Hey Pakhi
aha seeing you after ages on Sulekha:D well great to hear that you liked the story. Well i just wanted 2 write a paranormal thriller, im glad you noticed the lil bit of other genre i have tried to introduce in the story. its good to know that the momentum was sustained:D
well you are tellin me tht ur gonna put somethin up "sometime soon" for a loong time now:P bring on the fiction:D n well ill try to keep the standards of my fiction up. but i guess ill do something light next time round:P
take care
ciao!



  taureandude23 posted 2 weeks ago

HI Nth writer
well glad that i could maintain the momentum and surprise you with the climax:d
take care
ciao



  pakhi_littlebirdie posted 3 weeks ago

Gawddd...you seem to get better with every fiction of yours. That was simply S.U.P.E.R.B.
Some comedy , Romance ;) , Thrill , the Supernatural [ almost] and the strong social message in the end. Nice way to sell ideas in a world where no one has time for the clandestine mumbo -jumbo ....
I'm completely bowled over by the ending.
I must tell you that i read the blog ages back but landed @ home just a few days back hence the delay in posting the comment. I'll try to bring up my fiction sumtime soon [ if you can guess from the tone its not gonan be too soon :P ]
But now that you've invoked my hunger for your kinda fictions , better bring more of em :)
you know not to annoy a hungry tigress...wat say?

Cheers!
Pakhi



  Nth Writer posted 1 month ago

That left a chill in my heart!... Keep writing :)



  taureandude23 posted 1 month ago

Yo PF
glad that i could sustain the momentum and maintain the twist good enough:D hehe:D yeaa wanted to make it spooky:D thanks for liking the story n reading all the installments patiently.
well yeaah i did conceptualize n write the story in one sitting, cus by nature i am lazy and i didnt want this idea to just remain a hallucination. later on i just made it more descriptive to build the "mahaul":D
take care
ciao



  pavementfreud posted 1 month ago

Dude,

Neat twist in the tale

Sasura ekdum zor ka zhatka diyela hain tune!

Now things fall in place...the same set of clothes...missing office...the garrulous n mysterious gal...

....spooky wid a capital 'S'

Good show bro!

Waise, did you write the entire story at one go or part by part?

PF



  taureandude23 posted 1 month ago

Hey Harsh
thrilled to know that the last installment lived upto the expectation. As for Darna series, well i loved the 1st installment very much. thanks for liking the story. well i dont know anything about technicalities behind the screenplay:D but now that u have mentioned it, ill look it up :D
take care
ciao



  taureandude23 posted 1 month ago

Hey Tanushri
thanks a lot for liking the story till the end. well rapes in trains keep happening, though oflate it has reduced, but its still reality n its scary,
take care
ciao



  ushasuryamani posted 1 month ago

Phew ! That was terrific. What a turn ! What a twist ! what a way to realise...Good one Dude..retained   the suspense..



  CaravanBpl posted 1 month ago

Thanks! Whew.. what an unexpected twist,,,
Can be an apt choice for Ramu - in case he wants to make his Darna.. series Part III

Keep up the good work! This also has all elements of a screenplay built in ... 

~Harsh Puri





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